Chapter 5 – The Piercing Scene
The waxing was done. Karan’s arms and legs now glowed with an unfamiliar smoothness. He sat on the edge of the bed, a towel draped across his lap, slowly rubbing his forearm, lost in thought.
Rekha and Rani stood by the mirror, discussing something in hushed voices. Then Rekha turned, her eyes soft but determined.
Rekha: "Kareena… ek aur cheez baaki hai."
Karan looked up. Her voice had changed — gentler, yet deeper.
Karan: "Kya?"
Rekha (gently): "Dekh please mana mat karna.."
Karan: "Offo! Batao to pehle."
Rani opened her palm. Two delicate golden jhumke sat there, glinting in the light. Their gentle curve, the small hanging pearls — beautiful and unmistakably feminine.
Karan stared at them.
Karan (quietly): "Yeh toh… pehnne ke liye… kaan chhidwana padega na?"
Rekha came and sat beside him. Her hand rested on his bare shoulder.
Rekha: "Haan. Bas bahut thoda sa pain hoga. Par uske baad ye jhumke bahut sundar lagenge Kareena ke upar.."
Karan (hesitant): "Lekin bhabhi… yeh toh permanent hota hai. Baad mein… log kya kahenge?"
Rani (kneeling beside him): "Kya kahenge log, ki ladka fashionable hai. Aajkal kitne ladke kaam chidhwate hain. Tauji ke bhi to chidhe hue hain."
Rekha cupped his face, making him look at her.
Rekha: "Tune toh kaha tha — tujhe mujh par bharosa hai. Toh aaj mujhe apna ek nishaan dene do. Jisme main tumhe har baar dekhun… aur kahun: yeh mera Karan hai. Yeh meri Kareena hai."
His eyes moistened. He looked down at the jhumke again. Gold. Soft. Pure.
He nodded.
Karan (softly): "Chalo… chhidwa lo."
✨ The Goldsmith by the Temple
An hour later, they sat near a small goldsmith shop, tucked beside the old Shiv mandir. The bells rang in the background. Marigold petals lay scattered on the ground from an earlier pooja.
The old goldsmith looked up from his bench and adjusted his glasses.
Sunar: "Arey Rekha bitiya! Itni saal baad… aur yeh naya mehmaan?"
Rekha (smiling): "Devar hai mera, Karan. Gaon mein pooja hai. Humare gaon mein ladkon ka kaam chidhwane ka riwaz hai to socha ye bhi baaki logon ki tarah pehan lega. "
The old man smiled warmly at Karan, unaware or perhaps silently accepting of what he saw.
Sunar: "Toh dono side mein chhidhwana hai?"
Rani: "Haan"
Karan sat on the wooden stool. The cold metal of the clamp touched his earlobe. He winced.
Karan (nervously): "Bhabhi… dard hoga?"
Rekha took his hand in hers, squeezed gently.
Rekha: "Bas ek chhoti si chubhan. Uske baad… tu bas Kareena ho jayegi. (Whispering in the ear so that the goldsmith doesn't hear)."
The goldsmith marked two tiny dots. He took out the needle.
Sunar: "Ready ho?"
Karan looked once at Rekha, once at Rani. Both nodded silently, holding him steady.
Karan (eyes closed): "Kar do."
SNAP!
The first ear was done. A sharp sting, a jolt — his hand gripped Rekha’s tighter.
SNAP!
The second. Tears pricked his eyes, not just from the pain.
Rani quickly wiped his cheeks.
Rani (smiling): "Bas ho gaya, Devar ji. Ab dekho toh zara."
She held up a small mirror.
Karan looked.
There they were — 2 golden balis.
Glistening against his clean skin. His hair fell slightly over his ears, framing them softly.
He blinked.
He wasn’t sure if it was joy, fear, surrender… or something else. But he looked at Rekha with trembling lips.
Karan: "Main… alag lag raha hoon bhabhi."
Rekha leaned in and whispered.
Rekha: "Alag nahi… ab toh asli lag raha hai."
🔔 That Evening
Back at home, Kareena stood in front of the mirror in just a towel, gently touching her ears. The pain was reduced and golden balis were now replaced with jhumkas.
Each time the jhumkas moved, they made a tiny ching-ching sound. Like a whisper.
Like a song.
He turned… and smiled.
Not Karan’s smile.
Kareena’s.
Discussion (15)
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@CDMeera. Wow great part. Make it more spicy and make Kareena having periods and make her fully feminine. Some sexy scenes will make her thrue girl. Enjoying bathing like a girl with Rani and Rekha, dressing with them etc like things. Make her try more dresses.
@CDMeera. My most favourite dress is pattupavadai blouse. Earlier I used to wear my sister's pattupavadai and blouse, but now my body is grown and I can't find that thing online fully stitched 😞. Now I daily wear inners with sanitary pad, nighty with underskirt, skirt and top, half saree, churidar etc. to be like a girl during my sleep time. As I am little bit fatty, I got A cup boobs which will fill my 42 A bra easily and provide a great feeling and support to my breasts. My mom always ask me to reduce my weight, but if I reduce my weight, my sweet boobs will be gone forever. I also wear saree sometimes. (I love to wear a pattupavadai blouse to my size one day, I hope it happens) Meera sweety, when will be the next part published?
That's awesome Anbeena. I hope you are having really good time with your inner self. I envy you.😔 Teh next part will be published when you provide me your honest feedback and some suggestions so far 😉
That's awesome Anbeena. I hope you are having really good time with your inner self. I envy you.😔 Teh next part will be published when you provide me your honest feedback and some suggestions so far 😉
The next part is uploaded, Dear! Let me know if you like it. Also, let me know if I should mark this finished or continue.
Nice start sis
Thank you Sis! It means a lot. Please let me know if you have any feedback 🙏
The next part is uploaded Sis. Suggest if I should continue or mark it complete.
Yeah sure Meera. What's your favourite👗?
It's sari, 🥻 anyday! What about you?
Thank-you sweety for your reply and consideration... Meera 💓
You are most welcome darling. Let me know if you liked the new addition. It means a lot to me.
Please continue... The starting is so good. Make sure you add bra and panty to this story. Many writers purposefully omit these things nowadays in cd stories. I don't know why they are doing this. I am even wearing a churidar suit with proper inners when writing this comment. Eager to read the second part of this story. 💗
Thank you so much dear Anbeena. I am glad that you like the starting. Thank you for your suggestion and encouragement. The next part is specially for you. Let me know if you like it.