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"From Ponytail to Pallu"

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Part 2

The ceiling fan creaked slowly overhead, spreading a warm breeze through Vansh’s room. He stirred in bed, eyes still heavy, limbs still sore. The previous night’s shaving session had been awkward and exhausting. His arms felt smooth but strange, and his face looked unfamiliar every time he glanced in the mirror.

Knock-knock.

“Vansh, get up,” came his mother’s voice. “You agreed, remember?”

He groaned and turned over. “Five more minutes, Ma...”

“Nope. This isn’t a college hostel. You want to play grown-up saree challenge, toh uth jao. Jaldi nahao. I’ve kept everything ready.”

Still half-asleep, Vansh pulled himself out of bed. His feet touched the cool floor, and he scratched his head, still in disbelief. Did I really say yes to this? But pride wouldn’t let him back out now.

He trudged to the bathroom. A bucket of lukewarm water was already filled. He took a long bath, scrubbing off every last bit of stickiness from the night. His skin still tingled slightly from the shaving cream.

When he came out wrapped in a towel, his mother was waiting in his room—arms folded, a smug smile on her face.

On the bed lay a perfectly folded cotton saree—a bright pink base with green borders, delicate golden designs dancing across the pallu, the kind of saree you’d see someone wear on a summer puja morning. Next to it was a green blouse—fitted, short-sleeved, and visibly snug-looking. A matching pink cotton petticoat sat beside it, neatly ironed.

Vansh blinked. “All this... already?”

Vinita nodded. “You thought I wouldn’t take this seriously? Come on. Petticoat first.”

He hesitated. “Do I really have to wear all of this?”

“You agreed. Saree ka matlab full attire. And don't start complaining already.”

Reluctantly, he picked up the petticoat and pulled it on. The fabric clung around his waist tightly as he tied the drawstring, a slight discomfort growing at his hips.

“Feels like I’m being cinched in,” he muttered.

“That’s the idea,” she smirked. “Now blouse.”

Vansh stared at the blouse and took a breath. “It’s tight, isn’t it?”

“You’ll manage. Girls wear these every day.”

He struggled to put it on, arm twisted awkwardly as he tried to get his hand through the sleeve. The back hooks were nearly impossible, and Vinita had to help.

“Stand straight,” she said.

“Ma, I can’t breathe,” Vansh gasped as she did the final hook.

“You’ll adjust.”

The blouse clung to his chest, pressing his shoulders inward slightly. The neckline felt too wide, the sleeves too snug.

Next came the saree. Vinita unraveled the six yards with a flourish and began draping.

“Stand still,” she instructed, tucking the fabric into the petticoat. “You’ll learn soon. But for now, let me do it.”

It was a slow process. She made perfect pleats for the front and tucked them in carefully. Then came the pleating of the pallu. She used over 30 safety pins, each one carefully placed—at the shoulder, on the side, even hidden inside folds to hold it all in place.

“You’re pinning me into a cage,” Vansh mumbled.

“Good. Welcome to our world.”

After thirty minutes, he stood in front of the mirror. The pink and green saree wrapped him fully, blouse hugging his torso, pallu cascading down from his shoulder like a river of cotton and gold.

“I feel like I’m gift-wrapped,” he said flatly.

Vinita chuckled. “We’re not done yet.”

She opened a small jewelry box.

“What is this now?” he asked.

“You said you’re doing it fully. So here’s the full look. Earrings, bangles, payal.”

“Ma, come on—this is overkill.”

“No arguments. This is for realism. And you don’t get to choose halfway. This is my challenge too.”

He sighed. “Fine.”

First came the golden jhumkas—dangling earrings that lightly tugged at his earlobes. Then a stack of pink glass bangles for each hand. They clinked with every small movement, the cold glass rattling against his wrist.

“Too tight,” he muttered.

“Chup. Girls wear tighter.”

She crouched and tied a pair of golden payals around his freshly-shaven ankles. With every step, they jingled.

The constant clinking, tugging, and pinching irritated him. But he remembered the condition. No complaints. If I complain even once, I wear this forever.

He held it all in.

Vinita then took out a green bindi and gently pressed it onto his forehead. “Now you look complete.”

He looked in the mirror. Saree perfectly pinned, bangles shining, jhumkas swinging slightly, bindi placed, and anklets jingling.

Only one thing was missing—his hair.

Vinita stood back, hands on her hips, scanning him from head to toe. “Only one thing left now—your hair.”

Vansh raised an eyebrow. “What about it?”

“You’ve got long enough hair. No excuses. Style it properly. I don’t want it just hanging like a mess. It should match the saree.”

He nodded slowly, glancing at the mirror. “What do you want me to do?”

Vinita tapped her chin. “Hmm… do a puff in the front, and leave the rest open. That should suit the blouse and saree.”

“You sure?”

“Yes. You’ve had three years to figure this out. Show me what you’ve learned.”

Vansh took a breath, sat down in front of the mirror, and began untying his bun. As he pulled out the pins one by one, thick, dark strands spilled over his shoulders and back. Within seconds, his full length of hair cascaded down—wavy, glossy, and perfectly maintained. It flowed past his shoulders, brushing the middle of his back, shiny and healthy thanks to years of Arya’s care.

He grabbed the comb and started detangling slowly, working from the ends upward like Arya had always taught him.

Vinita leaned in, arms crossed, watching in silence.

He sectioned the front portion of his hair, gave it a slight lift, teased the roots a little, and carefully clipped it into a neat puff using black bobby pins. Then he brushed the rest back and let it fall behind his shoulders.

The result was clean and elegant—a soft front puff, just enough height, and the rest of his hair framing his saree-clad body like a veil of black silk.

Vinita raised her eyebrows, half-impressed, half-suspicious. “You… you know how to do all this?”

Vansh didn’t meet her eyes. “I’ve had long hair for a while. Tried a few things, that’s all.”

“Hmm. Looks like you’ve done it more than just ‘a few times.’”

He shrugged. “Me and… someone used to try different styles, just for fun.”

Vinita gave him a long look but didn’t ask further. Instead, she smirked and teased, “Not bad, Vanshika. You’re starting to look the part now.”

Nehal entered just then and stopped in her tracks.

“What the—Bhaiya?”

She burst out laughing. “Oh my god. You actually look like a proper housewife!”

Vansh glared. “Shut up.”

“Vanshika,” she teased. “That should be your name this week.”

“Nehal, stop it,” he snapped, adjusting his pallu.

“Vanshika didi! Saree suits you,” she said with a bow.

Vinita laughed. “Okay okay, enough. Let’s start the day.”

First task—vegetable peeling.

Vansh sat on the floor cross-legged, a steel plate in front of him, filled with lauki, aloo, and bhindi.

Every time he bent forward, the pallu slipped slightly. His bangles clinked. His earrings swayed. His hair brushed against his cheeks.

He kept pulling it back.

“I told you to pin the hair,” Vinita said. “Or it’ll irritate you.”

“I’ll manage,” he replied.

His back hurt from sitting low. His arms itched with the sweat under the blouse.

Still, no complaints.

Once the peeling was done, Vinita handed him a stack of dry clothes.

“Iron these. Fold and stack.”

Ironing in a saree was a whole new task. The heat of the iron matched the heat of his body. The fabric clung to his legs. His bangles kept clinking every time he moved his wrist.

When he finally sat back, Nehal passed by. “You’re glowing, bhaiya. Saree sweat looks good on you.”

He didn’t reply.

Next, Vinita gave him the task of helping Alka bai in the kitchen.

He walked in, and Alka turned, squinting. “Aree? Madam ban gaye?”

Vansh rolled his eyes. “Challenge.”

Alka smirked. “You got the hips for it, beta. Now cut these tomatoes.”

He stood beside her, stirring the dal, chopping vegetables, and keeping the plates ready. The heat from the stove was unbearable. The saree stuck to his back. His jhumkas burned his skin when steam hit his ear.

But he stayed quiet.

When lunch was ready, he served Vinita and Nehal first.

Then Vinita said, “You eat with Alka. On the floor. That’s her routine.”

“Wait, what?”

“You’re helping like a housemaid. Eat like one.”

So Vansh sat cross-legged on the kitchen floor, eating from the same plate as Alka.

“You’re lucky,” Alka said between bites. “You get to wear clean saree. Mine smells of haldi by 9 a.m.”

Vansh smiled faintly, chewing slowly.

Post-lunch, he cleaned utensils with Alka, washed and dried them, then arranged everything back in the cabinets. His blouse was damp with sweat. His back itched. The payal noise wouldn’t stop.

Vinita came in with a duster. “Furniture.”

Vansh wiped every shelf and corner. Nehal sat watching, munching on chips.

“Didi,” she said. “Can you do my hair? I have to go for Riya’s party.”

He stared at her. “Me?”

“Yes, duh. You're practically my didi now.”

Vinita handed him a comb. “Go on.”

He rolled his eyes and sat her down, combing through her hair, parting it neatly, and doing a quick braided ponytail.

“You’re good,” Nehal said. “Vanshika didi knows all the tricks.”

After she left for the party, Vinita sat on the sofa and lifted her feet.

“Massage, please.”

He groaned.

“Not a complaint, I hope?” she asked.

“No, no,” he muttered, rubbing her calves.

His fingers hurt, his back ached, and his earrings still swayed as he bent forward.

After dinner, he changed into a cotton nightgown, pink with tiny floral print, handed by Vinita.

“Wear this. Better than t-shirt.”

He slipped into it, tied his hair into a loose bun, and sat down in front of her.

She opened a bottle of warm coconut oil.

“You’ve done enough today,” she said, massaging it gently into his scalp.

“You think I’m doing well?” he asked.

Vinita smiled. “You haven’t complained once. But your face says everything.”

He chuckled. “It’s harder than I thought.”

She combed through the oiled hair and tied it into a thick plait.

“Sleep. Tomorrow is only Day 2.”

He got into bed, sore, shiny, and silently nervous.

As he closed his eyes, the payals jingled one last time.

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Discussion (5)

Sai035
Sai035 11 months ago

Great plot. Please post the next part soon

Anbeena
Anbeena 11 months ago

Viana, how to change our profile picture like yours. I already added a pic, but it doesn't come. No options were seen for changing it. 😞. Can you help me pls...🙏

viana
viana Author 11 months ago

u can't change it

Jerusha
Jerusha 11 months ago

Loved every bit of it 🌟, eagerly waiting for the continuation ♡⁠(⁠>⁠ ⁠ਊ⁠ ⁠<⁠)⁠♡

Anbeena
Anbeena 11 months, 1 week ago

Super start Viana sweety. Looking forward to read greater, sexier second part. 💓

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