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The House That Swapped Its Roles

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The ceiling fan made its usual ticking sound as it rotated slowly above him.
Tick… tick… tick…
Morning sunlight entered through the faded floral curtains of the small bedroom, falling directly across his face. He turned sideways, pulling the thin bedsheet over his head.
“Still sleeping?”
His mother’s voice came from outside.
Not loud.
Not angry.
Just dangerous.

His eyes opened immediately.
“For two months you’ve been ‘preparing for exams,’” she continued from the hall, “but I only see sleeping, mobile, and tea.”
He sat up quietly.
The flat already smelled of frying onions and fresh chapatis. Somewhere downstairs, a vegetable seller shouted prices. A pressure cooker whistled from another apartment.

Typical middle-class morning.

And exactly on time — like always — his mother had already finished half the day’s work before eight o’clock.

He stepped outside his room carefully.

The hall was small but neat. Old sofa set. Godrej cupboard near the wall. Television muted on a Marathi news channel. Steel containers stacked perfectly beside the kitchen entrance.

And in the middle of all that order stood his mother.

Freshly bathed. Dark green cotton saree. Wet hair tied back tightly. Mangalsutra resting against her neck. One hand on her waist while the other rolled chapatis with mechanical perfection.

Without looking at him, she spoke.

“Look at your hair.”

He touched it awkwardly.

“Like some abandoned street puppy.”

“I was going to cut it…”

“When? Diwali?”

He stayed quiet.

That was safest.

His mother finally looked up at him.

Even at 54, her eyes had the same sharpness that made relatives lower their voices around her. In their society building, people respected her. Some feared her. Society secretary, festival organizer, financial planner of the house — everything eventually came to her.

And then there was him.

Twenty-four years old.
Barely five feet tall.
Thin wrists.
Soft face.
No beard growth worth mentioning.

Whenever relatives visited, the same comments returned like unpaid bills.

“Arre vahini(Bhabhi), your son is so delicate.”

“He got all your features.”

“Looks younger than college girls.”

“Such soft hands!”

People laughed while saying it.

He laughed too sometimes.

Because what else could he do?

“Why are you standing like that?” his mother snapped. “At least bring the tea cups.”

He quickly moved into the kitchen.

The upper shelf was too high. Like always, he had to stand on his toes slightly to reach the cups.

Behind him, he heard her sigh.

“God didn’t even give you proper height.”

The words hit harder because she said them casually. Not to insult but just as fact.

He placed the cups on the tray silently.

“Careful,” she warned immediately. “Your hands shake for everything.”

“I’m holding it properly.”

“Hm.”

That “hm” carried judgment stronger than shouting.

He poured tea carefully while she packed his father’s tiffin.

His father sat in the hall reading newspaper headlines through thick glasses, pretending not to hear anything as usual.

Retired bank manager.
Quiet man.
Peace-loving.

Which mostly meant staying silent while his wife controlled the house.

“Your son still doesn’t know how to hold a tray confidently,” she said.

Father adjusted his glasses without looking up.

“He’ll learn.”

“When?” she shot back. “After marriage? Poor girl’s life will be ruined.”

A small smile appeared on his father’s face before disappearing behind the newspaper.

The son lowered his eyes.

His mother noticed everything.

“See?” she said. “Even your posture. Shoulders down. Neck bent. Walk properly at least. You move around the house like some shy bride.”

His father coughed suddenly, trying to hide laughter.

That made it worse.

His ears turned red.

“I’m just tired,” he muttered.

“Tired from what? Air consumption?”

She placed the tiffin on the table loudly.

“Listen carefully,” she continued. “From today, enough laziness. If you’re sitting at home, you’ll help in the house properly.”

“I already help—”

“Helping means bringing one onion from kitchen?”

Her eyebrow rose.

“From today you’ll do actual work.”

He stayed silent again.

That usually meant the discussion was over.

But today something in her mood felt different.

Observing & Calculating

Like she had already decided something privately.

After breakfast, his father left for the bank pension office while his mother began cleaning cupboards.

That meant nobody in the house could relax.

“Come here,” she ordered from the bedroom.

He entered cautiously.

Clothes covered the bed in organized piles. Sarees, blouses, old bedsheets, ironed towels.

His mother sat cross-legged while folding clothes with frightening speed.

“You don’t know any household work properly,” she said. “At your age I was handling an entire family.”

“I can learn.”

“Then learn.”

She threw a saree toward him.

“Fold.”

He stared at it.

“What?”

“Has your eyesight gone? Fold it.”

“I don’t know how.”

“Exactly my point.”

She clicked her tongue impatiently.

“Come here.”

He sat beside her awkwardly while she demonstrated.

“Hold this side properly… no, not like that. Arre देवा (Oh godd)… your fingers have no strength?”

He tried again.

The saree slipped from his hands.

His mother laughed softly.

Not cruelly.

But enough to make him uncomfortable.

“You really would’ve managed better as a daughter,” she muttered absentmindedly.

He froze slightly.

She continued folding calmly as if she hadn’t said anything unusual.

But the sentence stayed hanging in the room.
Heavy.
Embarrassing.
Strangely personal.

After a while, the doorbell rang.

His mother stood up immediately.

“Probably Joshi kaku.(Neigbour Aunty)”

And it was.

Middle-aged. Loud voice. Always curious about everyone’s business.

The moment she entered, her eyes landed on him sitting among sarees.

“Aho!” she laughed instantly. “What’s this? Training him properly now?”

His mother smirked while adjusting her pallu.

“Somebody has to teach him basic life skills.”

Joshi kaku looked him up and down dramatically.

“Actually suits him.”

“Exactly what I say,” his mother replied casually.

Both women laughed.

He forced a weak smile.

“Arre don’t feel bad,” Joshi kaku continued. “Nowadays boys should know housework too. Anyway your nature is already calm like girls.”

His mother handed her tea.

“Calm? He gets nervous even answering the doorbell.”

“That’s true,” Joshi kaku laughed louder.

Then suddenly she looked at his face carefully.

“Aho vahini… if you put little makeup, oil and tied his hair properly, from behind nobody would even know!”

The women burst into laughter again.

His stomach tightened.

He wanted to leave.

But standing up in the middle would look childish.

So he sat there quietly while they continued discussing him as if he were another household item.

“He never argues,” his mother said.

“Soft nature.”

“Too soft,” Joshi kaku replied.

His mother nodded slowly.

“Yes. That is the problem.”

For some reason, the way she said those words made him look up at her.

Her eyes met his briefly.

Steady.
Thoughtful.
Almost amused.

And for the first time in his life…

he got the uncomfortable feeling that his mother was no longer embarrassed by how soft he was.

She was beginning to like it.

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Discussion (4)

Jerusha
Jerusha 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Ofcourse I did, my dear ✨

Radhika01
Radhika01 Author 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Thanks do support would love to connect with u didi

Jerusha
Jerusha 2 months, 3 weeks ago

sooo glad that many have taken up writing in this site 😌✨, may this community prosper 🌟

Radhika01
Radhika01 Author 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Yes sure sis i hope u liked the story plot

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