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The House That Swapped Its Roles

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Part 3

By evening, the entire building smelled of fried chillies and tadka.

Scooters returned to parking spots downstairs. Pressure cookers whistled from every flat. Somebody’s TV blasted an old Marathi serial title song through thin walls.

Inside their flat, his mother moved through the kitchen with the same commanding energy she carried all day.

“Cut the coriander properly.”

“I am cutting properly.”

She glanced once at the chopping board and sighed dramatically.

“Those are not pieces. That is murder.”

He pressed his lips together silently and tried again.

Since morning she had kept him busy nonstop.Folding clothes.Cleaning steel containers.Sorting vegetables. Even learning how to make round chapatis — which ended in complete disaster.

One chapati looked like Uganda.
Another looked like Australia.

His mother had laughed so much she actually sat down holding her stomach.

“Hopeless,” she declared proudly.

He should have felt angry.

Instead, strangely, the laughter had felt… warm.

Not like relatives mocking him.

Not like school boys teasing his height.

This was different.

Her attention stayed on him constantly today. Correcting him, Watching him and Testing him.

And every time he obeyed properly, her expression softened just slightly.

Now he stood beside her at the kitchen counter wearing an old loose T-shirt and pajama while she prepared dinner.

“Pass me the masala box.”

He handed it over carefully.

“No confidence even in giving one box,” she muttered. “Stand straight at least.”

He straightened immediately.

“Not like army robot. Relax your shoulders.”

He adjusted again.

She looked at him for two seconds longer than necessary.

Then continued cooking.

That strange silence returned.

The one that made him uncomfortable without understanding why.

Finally he spoke.

“Why are you staring?”

“I’m observing.”

“Observing what?”

She added tadka to the pan before answering casually.

“How someone can look exactly like his mother and still act surprised about it.”

“I don’t look like you.”

His mother turned slowly.

“Really?”

Her eyes moved from his face to his wrists, then hair, then small frame.

“You got my eyes.”
He looked away.
“My hair too.”
Silence.
“My skin color.”
Another silence.
“And unfortunately,” she added, “my height is taller”
He immediately frowned.
“I’m not that short.”

She burst out laughing.

“Arre baba, when you stand near kids playing in our society, even they look taller.”

He rolled his eyes.

She noticed and smirked.

“Attitude also coming now?”

Before he could answer, the doorbell rang again.

This time it was his cousin.

Tall. Loud. Gym-going. Everything he wasn’t.

“Kay re! (whatsuppp)” he entered laughing. “Mavshi(aunty) said you’re becoming house maid now!”

His mother looked pleased.

“At least someone in this house should know work.”

Brother dropped onto the sofa dramatically.

“Bro, what happened to you? Last time also you looked thinner than my sister.”

“Eat your food quietly,” he muttered.

But cousin brother had already noticed the coriander in his hands.

“No way,” he laughed loudly. “You’re helping in kitchen also?”

His mother answered before he could.

“Helping? He’s under training.”

“Training for what?” brother grinned.

She gave a calm, dangerous smile.

“To survive life.”

Dinner became torture.

Cousin kept joking nonstop.

“Mavshi, marry him into rich family. Perfect sanskari daughter-in-law.”

“Arre yes,” his mother replied casually while serving bhaji. “At least there he’ll be appreciated.”

Even his father laughed at that one.

The son stared at his plate silently.

Normally he would leave the table by now.

But his mother noticed his expression immediately.

“Why this face?”

“Nothing.”

“You’re getting upset over jokes?”

Cousin smirked.

“Aai ga, sensitive also.”

His mother shook her head dramatically.

“This boy was born with emotions only. No toughness at all.”

Something about everyone laughing together made heat rise in his chest.

“I said enough,” he snapped suddenly.

The table went quiet.

Even he looked shocked at his own voice.

His mother slowly placed down the serving spoon.

“Excuse me?”

“I’m tired of everyone saying same things.”

Brother raised eyebrows.

“Oho.”

His mother leaned back calmly.

“What same things?”

“That I’m soft… weak… like a girl…”

Nobody spoke.

His father quietly focused on eating.

Big mistake.

Because now his mother’s full attention settled on him.

“And what is so insulting in being compared to women?” she asked evenly.

He opened his mouth.

Closed it again.

She continued calmly.

“You think women are weak?”

“No, I didn’t mean—”

“Then?”

He had no answer.

Her voice became cooler.

“You get offended because people say you’re gentle? Soft-spoken? Helpful at home?”

“They don’t mean it nicely.”

“Because you hear it like insult.”

She wiped her hands with a towel and stood up.

“Listen carefully. Masculinity is not shouting loudly and growing beard like roadside tapori boys.”

Cousin brother suddenly became very interested in his water glass.

His mother looked directly at her son.

“But if you’re going to behave softly,” she continued, “then at least stop acting ashamed of it.”

The room stayed silent.

The words hit strangely deep.

Not comforting.

Not insulting.

Something else.

Like she was giving permission for something he himself kept resisting.

After dinner, that cousin finally left.

His father disappeared into the bedroom with newspaper as usual.

And the son started washing plates quietly near the sink.

Water ran steadily over steel utensils.

Behind him, his mother entered the kitchen.

“You got angry too quickly today.”

“I didn’t like it.”

“Hm.”

He continued scrubbing silently.

Then suddenly she spoke again.

“Turn around.”

He frowned slightly but obeyed.

Her eyes scanned him carefully.

“Your hands are becoming smoother from not doing any real work.”

“What kind of observation is that?”

“Fact.”

Before he understood, she grabbed his wrist lightly.

He froze.

Her fingers turned his hand slowly under the kitchen light.

“No roughness,” she murmured. “Even my hands were tougher at your age.”

His heartbeat became strangely uneven.

She released him casually.

“Tomorrow you’re helping me clean the storeroom.”

“Aai…”

“No arguments.”

Then, just before leaving the kitchen, she added without turning back:

“And tie your hair tomorrow while working. It keeps falling on your face every two minutes.”

He stared after her.

“Aai, I don’t tie my hair.”

She stopped at the doorway.

Then looked over her shoulder with the faintest smile.

“You will tomorrow.”

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Discussion (4)

Jerusha
Jerusha 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Ofcourse I did, my dear ✨

Radhika01
Radhika01 Author 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Thanks do support would love to connect with u didi

Jerusha
Jerusha 2 months, 3 weeks ago

sooo glad that many have taken up writing in this site 😌✨, may this community prosper 🌟

Radhika01
Radhika01 Author 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Yes sure sis i hope u liked the story plot

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