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From Cauvery to Ganga

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Part 3

Chapter 3: Echoes of a Borrowed Life

The evening breeze carried the faint scent of wet earth and wild jasmine from the riverbank as the man’s desperate sobs continued to fill the quiet green path. Satyaraj, still trapped in the soft maroon churidar, dupatta slipping from one shoulder, stood frozen, his heart hammering wildly against the padded bra. The stranger’s strong arms were wrapped tightly around him, the rough fabric of the man’s shirt pressing against the delicate cotton of the kurta. The smell of sweat, cheap beedi smoke, and factory dust clung to the man’s body.

Satyaraj tried to pull away, his smooth, waxed arms pushing weakly against the man’s chest. Glass bangles clinked loudly with the struggle. “What… what is happening? Nithya!” His voice came out higher than usual, courtesy of the light feminine tone Nithya had playfully coached him into earlier.

He didn’t understand a single word of the rapid Bhojpuri pouring out between the man’s tears.

Nithya stepped forward quickly, gently but firmly placing herself between them. She spoke in broken but understandable Hindi, her doctor’s confidence shining through.

“Arre bhaiya… calm down. What happened? Who do you think she is?”

The man, around 34, with tired, sunken eyes and a face lined by years of hardship, finally loosened his grip but didn’t fully let go. His calloused hands still held Satyaraj’s wrists, the contrast between rough migrant skin and newly softened, hairless arms painfully obvious.

“She is my wife… Sunita,” he said, voice cracking. “This is our daughter, Pihu. Sunita… tum kahan chali gayi thi? Main mar gaya tha tumhare bina…”

The little girl, no more than three, clung even tighter to Satyaraj’s churidar, burying her tear streaked face into the soft fabric near his padded chest. “Mummy… Mummy mat jao…” she whimpered in a mix of Bhojpuri and broken Hindi.

Nithya shook her head, smiling awkwardly. “No, no… she is my sister. Not your Sunita. You’re mistaken.”

But the man was already fumbling in his pocket with trembling fingers. He pulled out a worn, folded photograph and held it up with desperate hope.

Satyaraj’s breath caught in his throat.

The woman in the photo looked eerily similar to how he appeared right now. Same fair complexion, similar delicate features, long black hair tied in a bun, even the way the sindoor would sit in the parting. The resemblance was uncanny, almost frightening.

The man’s story poured out in broken sentences, mixed with heavy emotion. He spoke of a bitter fight eight months ago. Harsh words. His wife Sunita had stormed out one evening after a particularly bad fight about money and his drinking. She never returned. As poor migrant workers from a small village near Muzaffarpur, no one in the police or local authorities cared enough to search seriously. “We are just numbers to them,” he said bitterly, tears flowing freely. “Bihari mazdoor… who will waste time for us?”

Satyaraj felt a strange tightness in his chest. The weight of the dupatta on his shoulders, the gentle pressure of the padded breasts, the constant jingling of bangles, everything suddenly felt heavier. The little girl refused to let go, her tiny fingers gripping the churidar fabric as if afraid her “mother” would vanish again.

Nithya listened with apparent sympathy, occasionally glancing at Satyaraj with an unreadable expression. But when the man broke down further, explaining the real crisis, her eyes sharpened.

Their entire family, him several others, was bound under a labour contract with one of the big clothes company in the Erode Tirupur belt. The contractor had brought them here with promises of steady work. But the new factory inspection was coming in just four days. The welfare officers demanded proper family documentation. If the wife was not present, the entire contract would be cancelled. They would lose their rooms in the colony, their jobs, and still owe massive brokerage fees to the middlemen.

“I will have nothing left,” the man whispered, voice hoarse. “Pihu will have nothing.

The little girl looked up at Satyaraj with huge, tear-filled eyes, still calling him “Mummy.”

Satyaraj felt overwhelmed. The river nearby seemed louder now, its gentle flow mocking the chaos unfolding on its banks. His smooth, perfumed skin prickled with unease under the feminine clothes. The jasmine flower in his hair had started to wilt in the humid air.

Nithya’s face shifted. For a brief second, a small smirk tugged at the corner of her lips, so quick Satyaraj almost missed it. Then it vanished, replaced by a perfectly crafted expression of sorrow and concern.

She took out her phone, noted down the man’s number, and gave him hers.

“Don’t worry, bhaiya. I’ll think of something. I’ll contact you soon. We’ll try to help.”

The man nodded gratefully, still reluctant to leave. Pihu had to be gently pried away from Satyaraj’s legs, her small hands leaving wrinkles on the churidar. Both father and daughter kept looking back as they slowly walked away into the growing darkness, their figures eventually swallowed by the trees.

The walk back to Nithya’s place was silent.

As soon as they stepped into the privacy of her salon room, Satyaraj turned on her, voice shaky.

“Nithya… how exactly are you planning to help them? That man looked completely broken. And the child…”

Nithya locked the door behind them. She slowly walked around him, eyes tracing the way the churidar hugged his body, the dupatta draped elegantly, the bindi still perfect on his forehead. The smirk from earlier returned, this time staying.

She tilted her head, voice soft but dangerous.

“Why can’t you be the wife, Raj?”

The words hung in the air like the heavy scent of jasmine and sweat.

Satyaraj stared at her in the vanity mirror, his reflection, that eerily convincing young Bihari woman, staring back with wide, kohl-lined eyes. The glass bangles on his wrists caught the light as his hands trembled slightly.

Outside, the Cauvery continued its eternal flow, carrying away old lives and quietly delivering new ones.

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Discussion (11)

Thinku
Thinku an hour ago

Hi Jeru, loved the story. Please post "your name" also. Also consider my old suggestion of doing a fully forced fem story. Like with a villain and all. Haha. Let me know if we can connect somewhere in social media.

Das
Das 4 hours ago

I'm really eager to read Your Name! I haven't had the chance to read it yet. please share it on Wattpad if it's available ther

Jerusha
Jerusha Author 3 hours ago

Awwww soooo happy~~ to see someone excited for my imaginations 🥹 and sure I'll try to finish it up ASAP and publish em ✨

Das
Das 7 hours ago

Great story, Jeru! Never saw that Part 33 twist coming. The whole story was a roller coaster from start to finish, and it was definitely worth the wait. Crazy writing, crazy imagination. Loved every bit of it.

Jerusha
Jerusha Author 6 hours ago

Thank youu very much, means a lot to me 💫 I've been learning different ways of story telling, predominantly Monomyth and Freyteg's pyramid, I'll try to incorporate more of those with increased allegorical elements (⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴗ⁠ꈍ⁠)

JeruJoy
JeruJoy 9 hours ago

If y'all remember, I had teased a story named "Your Name.", i deemed it be of a entirely different genre, might not be suitable for this community. Perhaps if y'all are interested, I'll publish it in Wattpad...

JeruJoy
JeruJoy 9 hours ago

And again sorry for the delay in publication of the story. Contradictory to my initial small story idea, it ballooned to 42 Main chapters, which i had to write, proof check and upload in the website, damnnn it was exhausting 🫪

JeruJoy
JeruJoy 9 hours ago

First of All, a huge heads up to @Meghana Akka for the updation of the website and actively improving it ✨

Thinku
Thinku 21 hours ago

Thanks Jeru

Jerusha
Jerusha Author 9 hours ago

Awwww thankiee uuuuuiu, hope u liked the story!!! (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

JeruJoy
JeruJoy 1 day ago

jeru is sleeeeepyyyyy !!!!!, will upload the rest of the story tomorrow 😪

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