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The House of New Traditions

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Nalini adjusted her crisp cotton sari, her eyes scanning the familiar yet distant facade of her daughter's home in Bangalore. It had been years since she had visited. The rift, initially a small crack caused by her late husband's overbearing nature, had widened into a chasm after his passing. Her daughter, Priya, had fled the suffocating patriarchy of their ancestral home for a modern life, and in her grief and stubbornness, Nalini had stayed behind.

But time, and perhaps a creeping loneliness, had worn her down. Priya's repeated invitations, once ignored, finally felt like a lifeline. She rang the doorbell, her heart fluttering with a mix of anticipation and apprehension.

The door opened, not to a maid, but to her son-in-law, Rohan. Nalini blinked. He looked different, though she couldn't immediately put her finger on why. He was dressed in a simple kurta-pajama, but his face was remarkably smooth, devoid of even a hint of a five o'clock shadow.

"Namaste, Ma," Rohan said, his voice soft, eyes downcast in a gesture of deep respect. Before she could fully process his appearance, he bent down, gracefully touching her feet.

"Bless you, beta," Nalini murmured, stepping inside.

"Ma!" Priya appeared from the hallway, rushing forward to embrace her. The years melted away in that hug. "I'm so glad you're finally here."

The first few days settled into a comfortable rhythm. Nalini observed the household with the keen eye of a seasoned matriarch. She noticed things. The house was immaculately clean. The food was always prepared on time, and it was delicious. But what struck her most was the division of labor.

In her own home, her late husband had never lifted a finger. Here, Rohan seemed to be constantly in motion. He was the one bringing her morning tea, dusting the living room, and chopping vegetables in the kitchen. Priya, a successful marketing executive, did minimal chores, mostly just organizing her own work bags or occasionally setting the table.

One evening, as Nalini watched Rohan meticulously arrange the dining table while Priya lounged on the sofa reviewing a presentation, she couldn't help but comment.

"Priya, beta, Rohan works so hard in the house. Doesn't he get tired after office?"

Priya didn't look up from her tablet. "He likes it, Ma. Besides, I have a demanding job."

Nalini frowned slightly but said nothing more. It was modern times, she reasoned. Perhaps this was how young couples managed things now. Yet, an uneasy feeling gnawed at her. Rohan wasn't just helping; he seemed subservient. When Priya asked for a glass of water, she didn't request it; she stated it, and Rohan rushed to fulfill the demand immediately, without a word of complaint.

The illusion of a 'modern, equal' household lasted for exactly three weeks. The revelation, when it came, was not a grand announcement, but a quiet, shattering of reality.

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