Vansh had always been someone who paid attention to his appearance, but nothing had ever come close to the kind of attention he gave to his hair now. For the past three years, he had grown it out slowly, carefully, lovingly. It wasn’t something he did on a whim. Arya had asked him once, “Will you grow your hair out for me? I love long hair on boys.”
And somehow, despite laughing it off at first, he did. What began as a silly gesture for his girlfriend turned into a commitment. She wasn’t just supportive—she was obsessive. Every weekend call began with, “Did you oil it?” or “Show me how long it’s gotten now.” She had him on a full hair care regime: hot oil massages, shampoo rotations, leave-in conditioners, DIY hair masks. She even taught him how to towel-dry it the right way. It reached his mid-back now, soft and thick, swishing like a glossy horse tail when open.
Arya used to joke, “Vansh, your hair is healthier than mine! Are you secretly in a shampoo commercial?”
His family, of course, didn’t know about Arya. They only knew their boy had long hair—really long hair—and had stopped bothering to ask why. It became part of the furniture of daily life. Ma would sometimes say, “Comb it properly, it looks like you just got out of bed.” His younger sister Nehal, six years younger and full of sarcasm, often teased, “Bhaiya, if you wear a dupatta now, people will start calling you didi.”
But today was different.
It was the first weekend of summer vacation, and Vansh had returned home from college. The heat was oppressive. Fans spun helplessly in the ceiling, barely moving the warm air. His mother, Vinita, stood in the kitchen, sweating in her pale cotton saree, wiping her forehead with the end of her pallu.
Vansh sat on the sofa, scrolling through his phone, hair tied in a low bun at the nape of his neck.
Vinita walked past and muttered, “Uff... this saree. Sweat sticks to everything in this heat. Men have it easy.”
Vansh looked up, amused. “But Ma, isn’t saree supposed to be the most breathable thing? It’s open from all sides, right? So airy.”
Vinita turned sharply. “Arey wah, beta. So now you're an expert on sarees too?”
He grinned. “I mean… logically. Pants stick more. At least you get ventilation.”
She rolled her eyes and kept walking.
Nehal piped in from the other room. “Yeah Bhaiya, why don’t you try wearing a saree in this heat?”
Vinita laughed dryly. “Exactly. He should try draping six yards of fabric and doing housework. Then we’ll see how airy it is.”
Vansh stretched lazily. “Well, if it’s about heat, I don’t think saree is worse than jeans. Plus, you always said keeping long hair is so tough. I’ve done that, haven’t I?”
Vinita paused.
“Excuse me?”
“I mean,” he added quickly, “you used to say, ‘ladkon ko kya pata, lambe baal sambhalna kya hota hai.’ But look at me. I’ve had long hair for three years now. It’s not even that difficult.”
Vinita stared at him. “Beta, having long hair and maintaining it are two different things. I used to braid it every morning, oil it, manage it during cooking, work... it was never easy.”
“But I maintain it too!” Vansh insisted. “Oil every weekend, trim the ends, wash twice a week—”
“Because you live like a prince!” Vinita snapped. “Do you do jhaadu? Pocha? Stand in a hot kitchen with steam hitting your face while hair sticks to your neck?”
“It’s still manageable,” Vansh shrugged.
Vinita narrowed her eyes. “You’re missing the point. Saree, long hair, housework—everything comes with its own struggles.”
Vansh’s voice grew smug. “I just think people overreact. Saree isn’t some punishment. And long hair, if cared for, is easy. I don’t get the drama.”
Vinita folded her arms. “Drama?”
“Yes, like this complaining about heat and saree and hair. It’s fabric and style. What’s the big deal?”
Nehal peeked into the room, eyes wide. “Ooooo, Bhaiya’s going to get it.”
Vinita tilted her head, now visibly annoyed. “Okay. You think it’s easy?”
“I just said it’s not as hard as it’s made to be.”
Vinita’s tone cooled. “Then wear it.”
He blinked. “What?”
“Wear the saree.”
“Ma, seriously?”
“You said it’s airy, it’s manageable. Fine. Wear it for a week. Do regular housework. With your long hair, of course.”
He laughed, but her expression didn’t change. “Ma... it was just a comment.”
“Wear it,” she repeated. “One week. Full saree. Daily. Work with me and Alka bai. And—” she raised a finger “—if you so much as mention that it’s uncomfortable, or tough, or complain even once, then that’s it. Saree will be your home dress forever.”
Nehal gasped, clearly entertained.
Vansh looked at both of them. “You’re not serious.”
“I’m very serious.”
“What if I don’t agree?”
Vinita shrugged. “Then don’t talk like you know what it's like. Don’t belittle our struggles.”
His ego flared. “Fine! I’ll do it. Seven days. Saree. I’ll even help in the kitchen. Let’s see who complains.”
Vinita nodded. “Done.”
Nehal clapped. “This is going to be so much fun.”
“Starting tomorrow morning,” Vinita added calmly. “You wake up, you wear saree, you do work.”
“I’ll do it,” Vansh said confidently. “But don’t expect me to suddenly start dancing in it or anything.”
Vinita gave a small smile. “Nobody wants you to dance. But do everything else.”
Later that night, while Vansh was brushing his hair in front of the mirror, Vinita entered the room with a towel.
“One thing,” she said casually.
“Yeah?”
“No beard. No body hair. Saree doesn’t go with all that. Looks odd.”
He turned. “Are you serious?”
“Completely. Shave your beard, your chest, arms, legs—whatever shows. Either you do it right, or don’t do it.”
“But—”
“You agreed. Ego mein kiya tha na?”
He nodded slowly. “Fine. Razor?”
“Top drawer in the bathroom. Use the Veet if you want. Nehal has some.”
He stared at the drawer and then back at the mirror.
The confidence started to thin. He ran his fingers through his thick mane. It looked beautiful. He knew that. But now he had to match it with everything else?
Still, he had agreed. His pride wouldn’t let him back out now.
That night, under the hum of the ceiling fan, he shaved. First the beard—gone. He looked younger, unfamiliar. Then his arms. Then legs. Awkward, strange, but he did it. It took nearly an hour. When he finally lay in bed, exhausted and slick with moisturizer, he stared at the ceiling and muttered to himself.
“Just one week. How hard can it be?”
But even as he closed his eyes, there was a small twinge of doubt.
Discussion (5)
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