Chapter 39: The Fire That Burned the Old World
Weeks had blurred into one another like the endless smoke from the village chulhas.
I was now heavily pregnant, the advanced prosthetic belly had grown to what the system registered as 36 weeks. The swell was massive, round and heavy, stretching every saree I wore. My back ached constantly. My breasts were fuller and tender. My ankles were swollen, making the permanent silver anklets feel even tighter. Walking had become a slow, careful waddle. Every step made the glass bangles clink and the mangalsutra tap against the top of my belly.
The routine remained merciless.
I still woke at 4:40 AM, lit the kerosene stove, cooked for the family, cleaned the marble floors on my hands and knees (my pregnant belly making the position extremely uncomfortable), washed endless dishes, scrubbed bathrooms, and endured the casual cruelty of the Gounder household.
My mother would snap at me daily: “Ei Bihari! Can’t you work faster? Look at that belly, still moving like a snail!”
My sister would throw her dirty clothes at me without a word.
My brother would complain loudly in front of guests: “These migrant servants eat our food and breed like animals in our city.”
Even the new “Satyaraj” ,the real Sunita in my old skin, sometimes looked at me with complicated guilt when no one was watching.
I endured it all.
Because this was the path. The long, painful road I had chosen so that something, anything, could change.
The Day of the Fire
It was a hot, dry afternoon. The kind where the air itself felt flammable.
I was in the kitchen wing, heavily pregnant, sweating profusely as I prepared evening snacks for the family. My maroon saree was damp and clinging to my body. The tight blouse strained across my massive belly and breasts. The pallu kept slipping off my shoulder no matter how many times I adjusted it. My lower back throbbed with sharp pain from the weight I was carrying.
Suddenly, shouts erupted from the main house.
“Fire! Fire in the store room!”
Chaos exploded.
Thick black smoke billowed from the back of the mansion where expensive imported curtains, wooden furniture, and stored cotton bales had caught fire, likely from a short circuit in the old wiring.
Servants screamed and ran.
The other domestic workers, the ones my family had always praised as “loyal”, fled without a second thought, abandoning their posts, grabbing whatever they could.
I stood frozen for one second, one hand on my heavy belly.
Then I moved.
Without thinking, without considering my own safety, I waddled as fast as my pregnant body would allow toward the main house. The smoke was already thick. My eyes burned. My lungs protested. The heavy belly made every movement difficult. The permanent anklets jingled loudly as I ran.
“Appa! Amma!” I shouted in Tamil, my voice hoarse.
The new Satyaraj, the real Sunita, was already there, helping my mother and sister out of the smoke-filled corridor. He saw me and his eyes widened in horror.
“Sunita! What are you doing?! Get out!”
But I pushed past him.
My father was still inside his bedroom, too weak to move quickly. The smoke was thickest there. Flames were licking at the wooden doorframe.
I didn’t hesitate.
I covered my face with my pallu and plunged into the burning room. The heat was unbearable. My saree felt like it would catch fire any second. My pregnant belly brushed against hot surfaces. I coughed violently as smoke filled my lungs.
“Appa! Main yahan hoon!”
I found him struggling to stand near the bed. I grabbed his arm, supporting his weight with my own heavily pregnant body. Every step was agony. The smoke made me dizzy. My back screamed. But I dragged him out, one painful step at a time, coughing, tears streaming down my face, the heavy belly making balance almost impossible.
The new Satyaraj rushed in to help me at the last moment. Together we got my father to safety.
Outside, the entire family stood in shock as the fire brigade finally arrived.
My mother was crying. My sister was trembling. My brother looked pale.
And they were all staring at me, the pregnant Bihari servant who had run back into a burning house to save them while their “loyal” servants had fled.
That evening, the atmosphere in Gounder Illam had completely shifted.
I sat on a chair in the living room for the first time, not as a servant, but as someone who had risked everything. My saree was torn and covered in soot. My face was black with smoke. My pregnant belly rose and fell rapidly as I tried to catch my breath. I was still coughing.
My father, weak but conscious, looked at me with tears in his eyes.
“You… you saved us. A pregnant woman… you ran back inside when everyone else ran away.”
My mother knelt in front of me, something I had never seen her do, and held my rough, calloused hands.
“Sunita… we have been cruel to you. To all of you. We never saw you as humans. Forgive us.”
Even my brother and sister looked ashamed.
The new Satyaraj stood in the corner, watching everything with complicated emotions.
I said nothing. I only lowered my head modestly, pallu covering my soot-streaked face, playing the role perfectly even now.
But inside, something shifted.
This was the moment.
The fire had burned more than just curtains and wood.
It had burned away some of the worst parts of my family.
And I, Sunita Devi, the pregnant migrant servant ,had been the one to pull them out of the flames.
Discussion (11)
Hi Jeru, loved the story. Please post "your name" also. Also consider my old suggestion of doing a fully forced fem story. Like with a villain and all. Haha. Let me know if we can connect somewhere in social media.
I'm really eager to read Your Name! I haven't had the chance to read it yet. please share it on Wattpad if it's available ther
Awwww soooo happy~~ to see someone excited for my imaginations 🥹 and sure I'll try to finish it up ASAP and publish em ✨
Great story, Jeru! Never saw that Part 33 twist coming. The whole story was a roller coaster from start to finish, and it was definitely worth the wait. Crazy writing, crazy imagination. Loved every bit of it.
Thank youu very much, means a lot to me 💫 I've been learning different ways of story telling, predominantly Monomyth and Freyteg's pyramid, I'll try to incorporate more of those with increased allegorical elements ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
If y'all remember, I had teased a story named "Your Name.", i deemed it be of a entirely different genre, might not be suitable for this community. Perhaps if y'all are interested, I'll publish it in Wattpad...
And again sorry for the delay in publication of the story. Contradictory to my initial small story idea, it ballooned to 42 Main chapters, which i had to write, proof check and upload in the website, damnnn it was exhausting
First of All, a huge heads up to @Meghana Akka for the updation of the website and actively improving it ✨
Thanks Jeru
Awwww thankiee uuuuuiu, hope u liked the story!!! ( ╹▽╹ )
jeru is sleeeeepyyyyy !!!!!, will upload the rest of the story tomorrow 😪