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The House That Swapped Its Roles

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Part 4

The next morning began with rain.

Heavy monsoon rain hammered against the balcony grill while dark clouds covered the sky. The entire building smelled damp — wet clothes, chai, mud, incense from someone’s morning prayer.

He sat at the dining table half-awake, scrolling through his phone.

His mother snatched it from his hand without warning.

“Enough.”

“Aai—”

“Storeroom first.”

She placed a cup of tea in front of him and pointed toward the small storage room near the kitchen.

“Today everything gets cleaned.”

He groaned softly.

The storeroom was hell.

Old steel containers. Festival decorations. Broken mixer parts. Plastic bags inside bigger plastic bags — the official treasure of every middle-class Marathi house.

His mother had already tied her saree pallu tightly around her waist for work. Efficient. Focused. Dangerous.

“Come fast.”

He followed reluctantly.

The storeroom light flickered weakly as she opened cupboards.

Dust immediately attacked his nose.

He sneezed.

His mother laughed.

“Look at you. One little dust particle and you’ll faint.”

He ignored her and started pulling boxes down carefully.

After ten minutes, sweat stuck his hair to his forehead.

Again and again he pushed it back irritably.

His mother watched silently for a while.

Then finally:

“Wait.”

He looked up.

She walked toward him holding something in her hand.

A black hairband.

“No.”

“Yes.”

“Aai.”

“You can’t even work properly because of your hair.”

“I’ll manage.”

She gave him one long look.

That look.

The one that usually ended arguments before they started.

“Come here.”

He hesitated.

“Aai, seriously—”

“Why are you behaving like I’m asking you to dance in saree? It’s just a hairband.”

His face tightened.

She noticed immediately.

And that small reaction seemed to interest her.

Slowly, a faint smile appeared on her lips.

“Arre wah…” she murmured. “So much embarrassment over such a small thing?”

He looked away.

She stepped closer.

“Stand properly.”

Before he could protest again, she pushed his hair back with both hands. Her fingers moved through his soft hair calmly, efficiently, gathering it backward.

He stood frozen.

Rain sounds filled the silence around them.

Then she slid the black band into place.

“There,” she said softly. “Now at least your face is visible.”

He immediately reached for it.

“Don’t remove it.”

Her voice sharpened slightly.

He stopped.

She folded her arms and observed him carefully.

For a strange moment, neither spoke.

Without hair falling around his face, his features looked even softer. Younger. Cleaner somehow.

His mother’s eyes narrowed thoughtfully.

“Hm.”

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“You’re staring again.”

“Because now I’m understanding why old aunties keep saying the same thing.”

He sighed heavily.

“Please start your work.”

But she continued looking at him with obvious amusement.

“You know what your problem is?”

“What?”

“You would look confident if you stopped trying so hard to appear ‘manly.’”

“I’m not trying to appear anything.”

“Really?” she asked calmly. “Then why panic over one hairband?”

He had no answer.

Exactly then the doorbell rang.

His mother walked out casually.

He followed behind nervously.

Too late.

Joshi kaku entered carrying a bowl.

“Aho vahini, I made fresh chutney—”

Then she saw him.

And stopped.

For two full seconds.

Then her entire face lit up with wicked amusement.

“AYYOOO!”

He immediately tried removing the hairband.

His mother caught his wrist instantly.

“Leave it.”

Joshi kaku burst into loud laughter.

“Arre wah! Full makeover!”

“It’s only for work,” he muttered angrily.

But his mother looked completely unbothered.

“Actually suits him,” she said while taking the chutney bowl.

“Exactly!” Joshi kaku agreed. “Face looks so clean now.”

He wanted the floor to open.

Joshi kaku circled him dramatically like inspecting some exhibition item.

“So cute re,” she laughed. “From side angle he genuinely looks like—”

“Don’t finish that sentence,” he warned.

Both women laughed harder.

His mother shook her head.

“See this temper? Two jokes and immediately upset.”

“Because you both keep saying weird things!”

“What weird?” Joshi kaku grinned. “Nowadays boys and girls are same only.”

“Then make your son wear it.”

“My son looks like buffalo,” she replied proudly. “Yours has delicate face.”

His mother almost choked laughing.

He stood there horrified while the two women enjoyed themselves completely.

Finally Joshi kaku lowered her voice slightly.

“But honestly vahini… he really resembles you.”

His mother became quiet for a second.

Then looked at him again.

This time differently.

More carefully.

Like she was noticing details she had ignored earlier.

Same eyes.

Same lips.

Same narrow shoulders.

Same soft skin.

The only real difference between them was age.

Something unreadable crossed her expression.

Then she smiled slowly.

“Yes,” she said softly. “More than I realized.”

That sentence made him strangely uncomfortable.

After Joshi kaku left, silence settled again.

His mother returned to the storeroom while he followed unwillingly.

“You enjoyed that too much.”

“Of course.”

“Aai!”

“What?” she replied casually while dusting shelves. “You become entertaining when embarrassed.”

“That’s not funny.”

“No,” she agreed calmly. “It’s adorable.”

He stared at her.

She continued cleaning as if she hadn’t said anything unusual.

Rain thundered outside.

Inside the tiny storeroom, his chest felt weirdly tight.

“Aai…”

“Hm?”

“Stop treating me like this.”

She paused finally.

Then turned slowly toward him.

“How am I treating you?”

He struggled for words.

“I don’t know… differently.”

Her eyes stayed fixed on him for a long moment.

Then suddenly she stepped forward and adjusted the hairband again because loose strands had fallen near his ears.

The gesture was so natural.

So intimate.

That he forgot to move.

“You know what I think?” she said quietly.

“What?”

“I think you spent your whole life trying to become the kind of man other people expected…”

Her fingers brushed lightly near his temple while fixing his hair.

“…even though softness comes more naturally to you.”

His throat tightened unexpectedly.

She noticed.

Of course she noticed.

His mother noticed everything.

But instead of teasing him this time, her expression became calmer.

Almost gentler.

“Nothing is wrong with that,” she said.

Then, after a small pause:

“But if you’re going to stay soft… then stop doing it halfway.”

And before he could ask what that meant—

she walked out of the storeroom, leaving him standing there alone with the rain pounding outside and the black hairband still holding his hair neatly back.

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Discussion (4)

Jerusha
Jerusha 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Ofcourse I did, my dear ✨

Radhika01
Radhika01 Author 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Thanks do support would love to connect with u didi

Jerusha
Jerusha 2 months, 3 weeks ago

sooo glad that many have taken up writing in this site 😌✨, may this community prosper 🌟

Radhika01
Radhika01 Author 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Yes sure sis i hope u liked the story plot

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